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Divine Intervention

From "Numbers" Challenge
Beneath the Spring divinity
Where the blood thirsty red sea
Lays shimmering
Above heavens lights,
Where Venus, the silver planet,
Frolics and consorts with them
As a crescent moon
Croons

Despite the Winters dying wish
Where her waxen skin
Fades in the morning
Of the fertile green leaves,
elation with little life,
Sprouting and piercing many
Within four seasons
And making everything Beautiful,
Despite impending death

1- Alcuin of York on June 19 2007

What numbers challenge?
Alcuin

3- Alcuin of York on June 19 2007

Thanks, Shannon. One correction: Last line in S1 should have "who" (as in "who croons"). Otherwise, very nicely done.
Alcuin

4- Anstey on June 20 2007

this is very different from a lot of your work. I very much like what you did here.
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  • stephan
Shannon McEwen

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on June 19 2007
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Sharp like a wet noodle
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