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Shakespeare's Monkeys

Infinite Monkeys. Infinite Typewriters.

May 16, 2025  

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screwed up

                                                    
i noticed
that all your poetry
rhymes.

which
is fine

but
not every job
requires a hammer.
White_Feather - on June 18 2007

And you seem so sweet when poetry you critque,

but alas the rhyme isn't worth your time

Still I think your gaffes, are good for laughs -

I lost my repose and snorted coffee up my nose.


Anstey - on June 18 2007
I don't mind rhyming poetry. I just don't think that every poem necessarily rhymes. My point is - there are other tools to use to make our points. I don't usually worry about a poet's complete works when i'm critiquing. I just read the given poem and comment on it as it stands. In that case, my thinking on this matter is largely irrelevant.
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  • stephan

White_Feather - on June 18 2007

I understood your point, and have really enjoyed reading the irreverance this morning.


Derma Kaput - on June 18 2007

I like the title, but I think the rest of it nails down your point pretty well.
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