
This feels a bit more tell than show ("quaint, cute, and expensive"), and I think that's got to be reversed as the telling parts feel forced and less interesting (the last stanza) than the showing ones (the second stanza).
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Provincetown, Massachusetts ![]() This feels a bit more tell than show ("quaint, cute, and expensive"), and I think that's got to be reversed as the telling parts feel forced and less interesting (the last stanza) than the showing ones (the second stanza). |
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