2- Alcuin of York
on June 8 2007
OK, it is a connlachnoonie whatever. As e e cummings would say, “Pretty tricky!” That makes it inventive, possibly interesting in a curious way. But is it artful?
Alcuin
Doin'
Alcuin
Doin'
3- Shannon McEwen
on June 8 2007
not all together sure if it's art. More like a personal statement. It started out to be a connie thingy but kind of bastardized into this. Took on a life of it's own.
Besides it was fun as hell to write:P
Thanks for the comments!
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Life is what happens while you wait for great things.
Life is what happens while you wait for great things.
Besides it was fun as hell to write:P
Thanks for the comments!
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Life is what happens while you wait for great things.
Life is what happens while you wait for great things.
4- Anstey
on June 8 2007
While it's a bit off-form, i think it's close enough for gubmint work, and i also think it's fun and interesting to read. The title gives enough of a clue that i could figure out what your'e talking about, which I appreciate -- because I'm a lazy bastard, and I get frustrated when I can't figure out what things are about. I do think it lacks a little in terms of relevance, which isn't the end of the world, it somewhat makes up for that in graceful presentation. I'm not sure what to say I'd do with it if I were you, I suppose, you could tighten it to the form, ridding it of some of the slightly imperfect rhymes and such.
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- stephan
1- Tracey
on June 8 2007
Go, girl! Looks like the "connie" has gotten a hold of you but good. Maybe the form is your muse...? I like!
Sorry I'm not more articulate; just getting out from under some mild anesthesia. La-la-la...