2- Rene 
on May 21 2007
There is something so REAL about this piece! I love the statement and wouldn't change a thing with this one.
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Rene'
I am orbiting, I don't know where, but I am orbiting something!
More in Shan's Crap (Shannon McEwen)
Outta Step with Convention
I could write a sonnet
In iambic pentameter
To say I Always Love you best in June
Or I could just declare
My Love for you is way over the moon
But I’m not that proficient
At keeping the beat
Kind of like the way
I can’t control each erratic thump
Of my heart
Whenever you smile at me
In iambic pentameter
To say I Always Love you best in June
Or I could just declare
My Love for you is way over the moon
But I’m not that proficient
At keeping the beat
Kind of like the way
I can’t control each erratic thump
Of my heart
Whenever you smile at me
2- Rene
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Rene'
I am orbiting, I don't know where, but I am orbiting something!
- Shannon McEwen
Sharp like a wet noodle
on May 10 2007
from Canada
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1- Derma Kaput
on May 10 2007
I really don't have much to say here, except I thought this was very simple and lovely with a beautiful finish. I guess it could use a better title, perhaps, but the poem itself is pretty good.