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Infinite Monkeys. Infinite Typewriters.
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Did you think that i would not notice
how you fell in love with me even if you said nothing, i know how eyes sing hymns when hips sway how voices peel like church bells as indecent thoughts echo through otherwise decent minds Did you think that i would miss the ring on your finger, the way you have no panty-lines even if you do nothing i know how words are ordered carefully to avoid truth when lips glimmer like candles how touches are avoided like a collection basket on the off-pay week  Sarin - That's really good! Yes I'm some kind of freak, as they all sit & stare w/ their hallow eyes ~ I'm just a girl, No Doubt  Tracey - Oooh, I like this -- the "knowing" portrayed in the showing, the layers of veils and truths, the outing of what "decent" people work so hard to hide. I appreciate each tight and well constructed line, each crystal clear image, and am knocked out by the last three most original lines. If we had a faves list, I'd add this one to mine. |
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