Derma Kaput - Yow. I think you nailed the moment here. and pretty much all because of that first stanza. I'm thinking it must have pretty much flowed on to the paper after that point.
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retrospect
...
there is a moment of suffering
that last one half eternity
as the train pulls away
without me
had i not brushed my teeth
had I not stopped for a paper
had I not looked at her laying there asleep
breathing so gently
anything
any one thing less
then I'd be right where i should be
instead of here
waiting.
that last one half eternity
as the train pulls away
without me
had i not brushed my teeth
had I not stopped for a paper
had I not looked at her laying there asleep
breathing so gently
anything
any one thing less
then I'd be right where i should be
instead of here
waiting.
Derma Kaput - Yow. I think you nailed the moment here. and pretty much all because of that first stanza. I'm thinking it must have pretty much flowed on to the paper after that point.
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