Sunlight and daffodils

The fog rolls indolently into the bay
Slips like a vinyl pool cover
Over the salt water

Wraps the docks
And the two sail boats
Snugly in a sheer blanket

Before it obstructs the view
And my mind
To the sunlight

1- Kath on Mar. 27 2007

I like the indolently and then the pool cover as if its gone on nonchalantly and without effort-- as fog does...I like the "wraps
and the "two" and the final obstruction. Not sure about the daffodils.

2- Shannon McEwen on Mar. 27 2007

haha, I was on Mayne Island, in the Gulf Islands of BC. The island has massive amounts of daffodils growing everywhere!

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Shannon McEwen: on Mar. 22 2007
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