Skip to main content Help Control Panel
Infinite Monkeys. Infinite Typewriters.
More in Only In The Eyes of the Beholder On verdant Fields of LavenderCapricious gaze fixates For an eternity moment On verdant fields of lavender Sweet musk essence blooms Catalyze emotions into a frothy Tempest frenzy While images dance of smiling days with you Rain smell imminent erupts A pungent mix of scents As stormy tears a glisten Drop gentle patters Glycerin decorate lavender seas Scrambled egg angst appeased Sweet musk essence blooms Day dreams of years with you |
|
1- Kath
on Mar. 17 2007
A perfect beginning, the "capricious gaze fixates".
Such a capturing of how suddenly the surprising scent, and a rush of memory. The "frothy Tempest frenzy" is the results (wonderful too). Ah and "glisten" as a noun. Ordinarily we think of the verb, but it can ne a noun (and a very active one). The "Srambled egg angst" is unusual... I started thinking about that. It does make sense...especially for a dewy morning breakfast scene? Any other allusions? The tears mix with the moistness of the scene and its depth goes beyond the moment into years.