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On verdant Fields of Lavender

Capricious gaze fixates
For an eternity moment
On verdant fields of lavender
Sweet musk essence blooms

Catalyze emotions into a frothy
Tempest frenzy
While images dance of smiling days with you

Rain smell imminent erupts
A pungent mix of scents
As stormy tears a glisten

Drop gentle patters
Glycerin decorate lavender seas
Scrambled egg angst appeased

Sweet musk essence blooms
Day dreams of years with you

1- Kath on Mar. 17 2007

A perfect beginning, the "capricious gaze fixates".
Such a capturing of how suddenly the surprising scent, and a rush of memory. The "frothy Tempest frenzy" is the results (wonderful too).  Ah and "glisten" as a noun. Ordinarily we think of the verb, but it can ne a noun (and a very active one).  The "Srambled egg angst" is unusual... I started thinking about that.  It does make sense...especially for a dewy morning breakfast scene?  Any other allusions?  The tears mix with the moistness of the scene and its depth goes beyond the moment into years.

Zealy, Kee - being an ex auditor and DBA any other names are unprintable

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on Mar. 15 2007

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