
I much enjoyed this one. I love the line breaks as they add to the brokenness of the words. I have one question, what is the third color??
I am orbiting, I don't know where, but I am orbiting something!

Very sexy.
I think you could remove the (and cock) in the last line and still get the message across.
I love the madness of yesterday image, it leaves a wonderfully naughty picture in my head
Life is what happens while you wait for great things.
Life is what happens while you wait for great things.