
The cadence, imagery, word choice, everything in this poem adds up to a beautiful piece of work. I'm impressed.
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More in Rhiannon's Poetry High Altarwritten for a friend..but commentary still welcome
High Altar
I live to swim with the minnows in shallows of shadow In shaded sweet crooks of the river’s side To dance from her banks over forest floor’s fragrance And on to the deep wood by zephyrs I’ll ride To spin in the coolness of dusky sharp wetness Look up to the dapple of light twirling high Slow spiral in circles of lucid abandon And nakedly marvel as leaves merge with sky Then stopping abruptly I see you before me We smile as the woods ring with laughter’s light peal I’ll lift you up lightly to nature’s high altar By this my dear friend I know truly its real ![]() The cadence, imagery, word choice, everything in this poem adds up to a beautiful piece of work. I'm impressed. |
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