
Something about S1 distracts me from hearing the rest of the poem. Her garment is introduced awkwardly, like a broken observation, is that intentional?
I haven't yet connected the significance of title and body.

The entire poem is sort of metaphor for how I see the relationship of man and the world through the industrial revolution. It's somewhat of a political piece. The cotton and the mechanations and the fabric and the bringing in of india as a touch of british colonialism all tie it together. I'm not sure it particularly works, but that's where I'm building towards.