Jasmine Mann - hahaha I loved "You will bathe / I will snore". At first glance this seemed to be an airy love poem, but after reading it a second time, I see it has more blue to it.
I think the word "like" is supposed to be "lie", though. 
Nice job.
"Milk is for babies. When you grow up, you have to drink beer." - Arnold
"Milk is for babies. When you grow up, you have to drink beer." - Arnold
Mercieca, Andrew - DOH!!! I really had a bad day that day it seems...typo corrected.
Interesting interpretation of this being a "blue" piece, It's actually leaning more towards pointing out how futile (and self deceiving) love is.
Mos.
U668857 - Wonderfully clear concise writing again - minimalist yet pithy. One way of reading this ironically asserts the potency of the romantic myth over the reality of dis-illusionment. Warm lies are preferred to cold actuality - "lies" acts as a clever pun on deceit and the physical lying down in the co-habited bed. If truth leads to cold isolation then let us sustain our warm illusions of togetherness...Rgds., Alan.
Mercieca, Andrew - That's a great review Alan and also shows my playing with tthe words was well worth it. As always, thanks and glad you enjoyed.
Mos.
Shannon McEwen - First of all, I really like. Second, what I took from this, is the fundimental differences of sexes and how we manage to make it work. I also took that marriage is not all "happily ever after", its more "Comfortably ever after, until we decide comfort isnt enough"!
Life is what happens while you wait for great things.
Life is what happens while you wait for great things.
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