
gilt not guilt ... more saul than paul ... blinking back the light of the world ... damascus road is uneventful traffic ...
lot's of interesting word/concept play going on in here, yet it's very cohesive and to the point. I like this very much. I wasn't exactly struck blind by the poem's brilliance, but I was certainly struck. Nice job.

Many thanks, Derma
Yes - playing with a few external references here...the biblical conversion of Saul to Paul and distorting some of John Donne's (one time Dean of St Pauls) words...my agnosticism in the face of a magnificent church...Rgds., Alan.