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St Paul's Cathedral

Gilt not guilt, colonnade and font,
vertical air vaulting through organ music,
the cassock swished by milling throngs.
More Saul than Paul, I stay below
your veiled and whispering ascension;
crick and tilt expectantly
to recognize your simple waving
climbing still the concave light
whose distant apex winks the eye of God.
Far below, I'm sunk like marble
blinking back the Light of the World,
indifferent to geometric stone,
undoing old Donne's words -
Every man is an Island;
Death be proud, for thou art mighty and dreadful;
The Damascus road outside is uneventful traffic
and no-one asks for whom the bell tolls.

 

Derma Kaput - on Sep. 16 2009

gilt not guilt ... more saul than paul ... blinking back the light of the world ... damascus road is uneventful traffic ...

lot's of interesting word/concept play going on in here, yet it's very cohesive and to the point.  I like this very much.  I wasn't exactly struck blind by the poem's brilliance, but I was certainly struck.  Nice job.


U668857 - on Sep. 17 2009

Many thanks, Derma

Yes - playing with a few external references here...the biblical conversion of Saul to Paul and distorting some of John Donne's (one time Dean of St Pauls) words...my agnosticism in the face of a magnificent church...Rgds., Alan.


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