Query Letter - From the Outside Looking In

Dear ____

 

 

Danni, a lonely Radiologist yearns to have the big close knit family that Brent has and when love sparks between the two, she finally envisions a happy future filled with family and love, until a mistake from Brent’s past threatens to drive the two apart forever.

 

Danni Trenton loves her demanding job, but having lost her parents at a young age, she’s often lonely. Meeting Brent on several occasions Danni is incredibly drawn to him. Dragged to the zoo by his large and boisterous family Danni finds herself in heaven.

 

From tingles to pulling heart strings life seems perfect, until Cindy, an ex co-worker of Brent’s reveals she’s pregnant and insists its Brent’s! Danni feels helpless as Brent tries to juggle responsibility with love. Danni, trying to keep it together, discovers she’s also pregnant! Torn, Danni keeps it secret as she watches Cindy play game. As Cindy moves in, literally, on her man Danni remains sceptical of her claim.

 

Brent, stuck in the middle, wants to do the right thing for everyone. After a lovely Christmas together, Danni’s confidence is restored, until she walks in on Cindy and Brent, in bed. Fleeing, she falls and wakes up in the hospital, bleeding and devastated. Thankfully for Danni and Brent, Cindy’s lies start to unravel and remorse causes Cindy to ultimately confess.

 

With the truth vindicating him, love wins and as the New Year rolls in Brent proposes. With a wedding and a baby, Danni finally gets the family she has long yearned for.

 

My romance novel, From the Outside Looking in is complete at 200 pages and 92,181 words. I would be happy to send you the complete manuscript at your request. I have included a S.A.S.E for your convenience. Thank you very much for your consideration and your time, I look forward to hearing from you.

 

Sincerely

 

 

 

Shannon McEwen