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Black Dog

~writer's block as religious experience~

 

Black Dog

 

How do you dream

I never dream

 

Heaven has a fatwa

On my soul

 

Heavy as an angel

Pinned with prayers

 

Earth in a whirling

dervish dance

 

Enticed my dry mind

With a covenant

 

Till all the naked stars

Lay at my feet

 

Empty as the sky

I never dream

Comments

Norm milliken - on Jan. 21 2009

Every now and then I read a poem that makes me wish I had written it.  This is one of them, in spades, as my Dad used to say.  God, this is a fine poem.


Suter Bill - on Jan. 21 2009

Thanks, Norm.


U668857 - on Jan. 23 2009

I like the way this encompasses heaven and earth with such a pithy, ecomomy of words.

There's some fine imagery here. The rotating earth likened to a whirling/dervish dance; and sky emptied of stars, which lie strewn at the feet.

Earth's gravity can root us down, pull back the dreams that strain to fly. There's a terrible weight in those black holes and black dogs...

Rgds., Alan.

 

 

 

 


Suter Bill - on Jan. 24 2009

Much can be said for saying little...I reckon. Thanks for the read and the comments.


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