
Every now and then I read a poem that makes me wish I had written it. This is one of them, in spades, as my Dad used to say. God, this is a fine poem.

I like the way this encompasses heaven and earth with such a pithy, ecomomy of words.
There's some fine imagery here. The rotating earth likened to a whirling/dervish dance; and sky emptied of stars, which lie strewn at the feet.
Earth's gravity can root us down, pull back the dreams that strain to fly. There's a terrible weight in those black holes and black dogs...
Rgds., Alan.