
This is very vivid (especially since it is cold and so snowy right outside my window) The 4th stanza is my fave and I just love LOVE!! the line "and the sway of these hips caused you to shiver" What a great line!

There's a wonderful elemental fusion going on here - images of winter, death, decay and aging coalesce to form a powerful mix. The tone is plaintive, the mood poignant. Ah how we still sing Time's old story in a winter of years!...BRgds.,Alan.