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Songs Upon A Sea

Ice would cling to the rooftops;
slender fingers clasping December,
clutching the moon in silver apathy.

The cat howled at the wolf in the dark.
Hunger having seeped into empty bellies
and the night deepened, ripe with blood;
death hidden behind every shadow.

The Merrimack smelled of winter:
its slow decay ebbing and flowing,
like teeth gnashing on old bread.

Tell me again, when we walked this river,
when your skin was warm beneath your coat
and the sway of these hips caused you to shiver,
tell me again you used to love.

The stars weep what my eyes cannot.
I sing you songs upon a sea of ice,
but the woods won't answer your name,
and my soul is too old for these bones.

Laurie Blum - on Dec. 17 2008

This is very vivid (especially since it is cold and so snowy right outside my window) The 4th stanza is my fave and I just love LOVE!! the line "and the sway of these hips caused you to shiver" What a great line!


U668857 - on Dec. 17 2008

There's a wonderful elemental fusion going on here - images of winter, death, decay and aging coalesce to form a powerful mix. The tone is plaintive, the mood poignant. Ah how we still sing Time's old story in a winter of years!...BRgds.,Alan.


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