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Faunication

Sideways look,

I don't believe, she says, you know --
What's your favourite by Rimbaud?


Ah, say I, the best of him
was his full stop.  I cannot quote
his pages, though
I've read them all.  I don't speak French,
you understand, but he --
debauched, a dreadful man --
he spoke my tongue, and spoke it well.

He's gone to Hell, she says, and I --
well, I just sigh.  It's Hell he left. 
Full stop, he wrote. 
(Enough of this, this pleasure dome,
I'm done with poems.)

How brave he was --
depraved and vile --
while I just sit
and dread the hour
when cowardice alone will force
my own full stop. 

Sideways look,

Well, I can quote
each word he wrote.


I pity her.  She knows the lines
but never learned
to join the dots.

Laura doom - on Nov. 27 2009

First up, epic title; having skimmed the Rimbaud basics, appreciation followed. Next, the 'Farty Towels' conversational upgrade (nothing like Eliot, of course). Passing over your 'pleasure dome' obsession (apposite as it is), I squirted amusement at those designated and implied points along the pseudo-social continuum -- 'How brave he was/I pity her'.

Plus [fictitious fanfare] stuff for the reader to mull and pour into the illusory crystal; the transition from literary magnet to commercial magnate dumps a big qm over the interpretation of the bravery reference, and the sideways looks -- are they toward or away from the narrator?

I don't do the 'favourite line' thing, so here's several that write that wrong -- S2, given that I had to execute a headstand for optimal consumption. The 'debauched, a dreadful man' line could easily have been attributed to the italicised cameo (as was the S4 interjection). I wondered, but concluded that such an oversight would be out character, leaving me to effect a contextual counterbalancing act. I was also cooking a joint and smoking hash browns at the time, so I guess you could call the whole episode a life enhancing experience. A shame that Rimbaud had to go out on a missing limb, but at least I experienced the pleasure of florid Faunication...

(Yes, I insist I was reading the same piece you wrote Leanne


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