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The Rocks

A boulder gateway flanked by patchy grass

began the tarmaced car-park behind

the house. I smell the hot bitumen

they burned for re-surfacing: black glar

fuming the throat; the suck of shoe-soles

on still-setting tack. I hear the slap

of trainers leap-frogging clustered lumps

on playful dares to get from here to there -

the teeter on granite slab then leap of faith.




Glacigenic erratics, Midlandian moraine -

your polished quartz is a glint in time.

When my ice-age melts, I jump the years

to land on permanent shale and solid rest.

Your isotopes are through and through me:

their half-life clicks my Geiger counter.

Leanne Hanson - on Nov. 20 2008

Still chuckling at the last line

The great thing about this poem is that the opening lines reminded me of my childhood and it followed a similar age/rock metaphor throughout -- I really like this one, Alan.


U668857 - on Nov. 21 2008

Thanks, Leanne...yeah...strong memories of the old place I grew up in...bizaare to think those boulders came from a glacier 10s of thousands o years ago for us to leap about on...they're still there out back o the house I guess...Rgds.,Alan.


Shannon McEwen - on Nov. 22 2008

 I love the images this brings to mind, complete with smells and sounds.

I really love this.

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Life is what happens while you wait for great things.



Life is what happens while you wait for great things.
U668857 - on Nov. 26 2008

Thanks, Shannon


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