
Still chuckling at the last line
The great thing about this poem is that the opening lines reminded me of my childhood and it followed a similar age/rock metaphor throughout -- I really like this one, Alan.

Thanks, Leanne...yeah...strong memories of the old place I grew up in...bizaare to think those boulders came from a glacier 10s of thousands o years ago for us to leap about on...they're still there out back o the house I guess...Rgds.,Alan.

I love the images this brings to mind, complete with smells and sounds.
I really love this.
Life is what happens while you wait for great things.
Life is what happens while you wait for great things.