Einsperrung

Thanks for the feedback Jen. As you can see, I've made use of some of your suggestions, they do indeed make for a stronger piece now.

When it comes to titles though, he he, they're never simple with me. Often they rely on the variance in meaning between Germand and English ( a germanic language itself). These differences, for those who take the time or understand German, will lead to the revelation of another layer in the piece.

In this case, the title suggests an obstruction, which is indeed one way of looking at the web I weave. An obstruction to moving on and getting on with life.

Thanks again Jen.

Mos.