Einsperrung

Hi,

I like this.  Here are a few suggestions for you to consider:)

Line 3:  I would delete the word "all" and just have "alone" by itslelf. It ties in better with "alone" at the end of your poem.

Line 6:  I would delete "Cob" and just use "Web."  Again because it ties in better  with "web" which you use in your second to last line of this poem.

Line 12:  Perhaps "Your curse" instead of "you can curse".  For some reason it just sounds less ackward or it could just be me.

Also I think a simpler title would be better...like..The Web