See?

he he, comments are not only entirely accurate, but appreciated. You should note however, that the collection this belongs to (Early Bytes) was penned between 1983 and 2003, this particular one was 1995 if I recall. One hopes I've improved since then. For one, I never care if I ryhme or not these days, it's the message I contemplate more, a far cry from this tragic piece.

 Once again though, I do appreciate the comments and I certainly won't disagree with you for the most part.

 Mos.