2- EmilyRose 
on Apr. 4 2007
Derma Kaput:
Know what? I was playing with the line and stanza breaks, and, lol, mine were almost exactly like yours! One difference, but I do think I like yours better! Thanks!
Know what? I was playing with the line and stanza breaks, and, lol, mine were almost exactly like yours! One difference, but I do think I like yours better! Thanks!
3- Anstey on Apr. 4 2007
Derma knows poetry.
- stephan
4- Anstey 
on Apr. 4 2007
Possibly because he's so old he's had a chance to read it all.
- stephan
5- Anstey on Apr. 4 2007
or maybe not. 
- stephan
1- Derma Kaput
on Apr. 3 2007
Cards laid flat
up and down
can be interpreted
in so many ways
maybe it is in the grain
of your face or my hands
on the table