Haggard

I considered Rene's comments and have made some changes, perhaps not quite in the direction suggested however. I had to agree with Derma's comments here also. Then again, as I know what this about, I can see why it was so "weepy".

Having said all that, I think it is a stronger, more cohesive piece now and thank Rene & Derma for their input.

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