When I'm Forty-Seven

thanks everyone, I appreciate all the comments.....I wrote this as a spiritual poem, which is difficult to do without evoking a wide range of emotions.....which may be a good thing......some of the imagery may not resonate the same with all readers.....what I'm looking for would be any specific suggestions for improvement.....if something feels too vague or not connected, please let me know if you have any ideas for editing, and I will honestly evaluate it for use within the poem......though at the end of the day, some poetry may not satisfy everyone's taste.....Kat

by Kat on Aug. 23 2007