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Thanks Alcuin.
I made a couple of changes based on your comment. Though in line 8, I want to keep the imagery of hands holding, not holding roses. But changing it from "when hands would hold" to "when hands held" makes it feel awkward to me.
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...but what do I know?
by Someday In May on Jul. 20 2007