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Actually, I think "lain" is incorrect. I believe it should be "laid" or "lying", dependent on your intended meaning.
I also think it should be "pulls petals".
One suggestion for L8: Beauty remembers / when hands held roses / who knew nothing of death.
The whole poem has some very nice, even if sorrowful, thoughts.
Alcuin
by Alcuin of York on Jul. 20 2007