Surrender

I saw Papa Smurf's comment yesterday and was in total agreement, so I thought I'd wait and see what you produced and I'm glad I did, because this kind of fusion writing is really good for poetry. 

I think in the first version you had your degree "framed on the wall" - I actually wouldn't mind seeing that here, because "framed" has that double meaning which would be quite appropriate.  The milk motif in that last part, coupled with the female God, make this really interesting.  Very fertile and very feminine, but not in a way that should alienate any men.

I would love to see more of this, I think it's a quite exciting direction.