November

Hmm... Would this clarify the postman peice a bit?

Echoes of screams longing to be free

In memories of a cold November

Awaiting a delivery

Where no postman arrived

And then I can remove "delivery" in S2 L5... it's meant to be a play on the word I hate "delivery".  Packages are delivered by UPS...babies are not "delivered" to Moms. 

I would *love* the "wise woman" peice had that been my expectation for this birth.  Sadly, it was not. Otherwise I don't think I would have this to purge myself of.