November

Ooh!  You've got a great start here - gives me chills.  I'm wondering about the postman - which may not translate well.   Love the rape analogy, and think you could play that up a little more.  Maybe a little more word economy would increase the power of this piece . . . something along the lines of  . . .

Echos of screams long to be freed

Memories of a cold November

Where no wise woman arrived

Instead, the savior in white

Assuring safety

Silently He slices . . . 

opening me further

breach of trust

with silver spoons

leaving behind an empty womb . . .