Circumspect

Tracey:

Thanks for the comments.  I agree about that last line, but I can't figure out what to do with it.   It does seem like I need to pull a few words out of there, but the semi colon trips the 'flow' when I read it outloud.

As for random capitalization - I'll chalk it up to laziness.  Word automatically capitalizes when I push return.  Anyone know if that function can be shut off?