Before the Sea

White_Feather:  You're not embarrassing yourself at all, at least not in our eyes.  It makes us feel useful.  Very occasionally a great poet will come up with a work of pure genius that needs only the slightest touch up; every other poem in the universe that's ever been worth reading has been through a very painstaking fine tuning process.  The "art" of poetry is the quick bit.

Please ask. Nobody knows everything and other people learn just as much from your questions as you do.  So far I'd say the consensus is we like what you're doing.