Before the Sea

Wow, Julie, well done! There are a few things I keep "hearing" differently as I read this, but they're more style preferences than suggestions that would make this better. I'll share them in case you're interested:

I keep reading the first line as "I could hold you forever." Love the second line. I think you could trim the third line a hair: 

"But a changing wind inspires whim."

I'm wondering if there should be a stanza break before the last three lines, as they seem to beg to stand alone. They're powerful, and in a different tone from the preceding lines. They are lines of discovery and blessing following a scene.

Finally, beginning each line with a capital letter is jolting to me. But again, that's a total style call. 

I'm still really moved by this, and it's going to be perfect with the photo you posted.