The Bewitching Mist

Yeah, I know it is off here and there and needs some major tweaking.

My origional first stanza was:

One wicked night
When the moon was green
Six withches gathered together
It was a sight to be seen

I changed it trying to make the meter better.  I think it's the third line that needs to be tweaked the most.  That one doesn't have to rhyme and I can work with it more.

I'll have to think about your other idea too.  I really appreciate the help!