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Well, my point was that "holdfast" is a noun - I believe you meant the verb: We held fast...etc.
I don't see any problem with the tone or meter that would be a bad-bad, but maybe it doesn't sound right to your ear.
Alcuin
I don't see any problem with the tone or meter that would be a bad-bad, but maybe it doesn't sound right to your ear.
Alcuin
by Alcuin of York on Apr. 20 2007