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I like the sort of Kyrie-Hail Mary crocheting of words. It's pretty interesting to me. I felt like there are some connections that aren't quite there, but it's probably just me. THe line that i liked best was L7 - the pity line. However, I really wished you tied it back to the hands a tiny bit more. It seemed somewhat disjointed to me.

by Anstey on Jul. 25 2008