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Thanks Rene, some good suggestions, though I only acted on one. You're right, it does read with more power by removing "has".
I kept the "she/you" as is for it (in my right minded/left handed way at least) manages to portray the confused thinking at the time of writing this piece.
Mos.
by Mosquitobyte on Jul. 8 2008