Vacuum

Oh yeah, this one is good...very, very good Mos! To re-inforce the difference between she and you, you could use dashes in the first stanza after she...and they after you. It would kind of punctuate the thought process. I would suggest losing 'has' in the first line, it doesn't change the meaning but does emphasize the feeling.

I really, really enjoyed this one....

----- I am orbiting, I don't know where, but I am orbiting something!