Kaolin baths

Cheers Laura, this was a quickie straight onto the site yesterday so you've hit it as raw as it comes -- I'm not entirely sure what to make of it myself yet, so I haven't even thought about editing.  I'll most likely head down the paths you've paved though, since I'm too lazy to make any of my own.  The dream is a bit much, yes?  I don't need it for the rhyme, that's already covered, so I'm going to think of something slightly different.

I've been looking at the but/though, but I need them both (though) I think.  It doesn't actually bother me, but again -- lazy.  I'll continue to ponder.  Lazily.

The last line works for me but then, I know what I'm talking about.  I did sit and think for a long time before I stuck it in there, so that should probably tell me something.  It might need another stanza. 

Many happy penguins for taking a look.