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Where has she gone that traitorous bitch Itching, fixing to leave at the first chance Glancing directly into the mid summer sun Unbidden desires blinded by big ambitions

Missionary position overused and long clichéd Betrayed by the lure of the exotic movements Monuments made from fine silks and satin panties Ranting vulgar promises from smooth thighs

Skies gone dark, speckled with forbidden clouds Shrouded by the underside of the bastard moon Soon she’ll come back to my bleeding pen When greatness is placed on the succulent table

Fabled to bring forth the new beginning of time Rhyming in perfect sequence ... more*

1- Tracey on June 8 2007

Go, girl! Looks like the "connie" has gotten a hold of you but good. Maybe the form is your muse...? I like!

Sorry I'm not more articulate; just getting out from under some mild anesthesia. La-la-la... 

2- Alcuin of York on June 8 2007

OK, it is a connlachnoonie whatever. As e e cummings would say, “Pretty tricky!” That makes it inventive, possibly interesting in a curious way. But is it artful?
Alcuin
Doin'

4- Anstey on June 8 2007

While it's a bit off-form, i think it's close enough for gubmint work, and i also think it's fun and interesting to read. The title gives enough of a clue that i could figure out what your'e talking about, which I appreciate -- because I'm a lazy bastard, and I get frustrated when I can't figure out what things are about. I do think it lacks a little in terms of relevance, which isn't the end of the world, it somewhat makes up for that in graceful presentation. I'm not sure what to say I'd do with it if I were you, I suppose, you could tighten it to the form, ridding it of some of the slightly imperfect rhymes and such.
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