2- Anstey 
on May 18 2007
I think the key for you is going to be finding the right editor/agent that really understands what you're doign and your market. Because when you find the right one, you're going to take off. You've got such a cute little niche in the young childrens market... It's sad that your'e not appreciated yet.
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- stephan
3- Jen on May 18 2007
Thank you Stephan,
And when I do become a famous children's author you will definately be allowed on my private island in the tropics
1- White_Feather
on May 18 2007
Yes! Totally distasteful to my sensibility but I'm quite sure your intended audience would think it hilarious! Actually, what I really love is the last stanza because the way the words rhyme and flow is particularly catchy. I think the imagery would really grab at a school age child. You must find it challenging to bridge the gap between editors and your audience.