A problem of we, you and I in a poem

Leanne:

Let me refer back to my own honesty -- I said i hadn't read the pieces. I was generalizing. AND, I stand by the general verity of what i said. There's no reason a good writer can't use both 'i' and 'you' and use them well. BUT, frequently, those techniques make awful poetry, most likely due to lazy writing.

Pags is not a lazy writer. Pags rocks. I am not saying anything about Pags writing, and i never was. I was clear about that from the first line of my comment. 

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