nature vs. nurture

the first 8 stanzas -- all good......I especially like: "how dark could it be in heaven right now?".......but I would suggest ending your poem with the line "the hand of another God-wannabe".......to my ear, it's a stronger ending than the somewhat overused "the least of my worries".......all in all [what, another cliche??] I like the poem lots.....Kat