Rondeau

So... Ryan can't count to two rhymes!

I actually quite like yours, and the rentrement idea's there... since Shakespeare and the rest of the English mob couldn't deal with the restrictive rhymes of other European languages and called their sonnets "English", how about you just go with a yankee rondeau?  If you can't count the rhymes, the number of lines in each stanza is definitely going to be too hard :P

Laurie, don't be put off, they're not really all that hard. When you've got the form done properly once it's almost impossible to muck it up again. Unless you're Ryan