First try - Little Willies

There Miss feather I beg to disagree. The rhyme of back'ards with cactus is so outrageous that I love it. Mind, I think you have to say it with the correct accent. I have a broad lancashire accent when I choose, and in that it works just fine. In a posh public school accent the vowels are much further appart.

In the first stanza I wonder about switching lines 3 and 4 about. I wish I could offer a decent suggestion about how to mend that last line though.

As to the second stanza - I LOVE it

Finally - Yes. This looks as good a place as any to post your writings. I too found the vast number of choices regarding posting and creating sections quite scary at first. hopefully I'm beginning to get the hang of it now, and you will too.