Spot the Difference

I like this, I think the end needs a bit if tweaking, I don't like the line

"Avowing your love for me".

I think if you focus on the image of her being everywhere you look

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Life is what happens while you wait for great things.

by Shannon McEwen on Mar. 28 2009

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Monkeys: There are no monkeys here. If you're looking for monkeys, go away. Well, actually there are monkeys, but they're of the hairless variety that writes poetry and such. If that's not what you're looking for move along.