Spot the Difference

Stigmata Diabolic

No tears to celebrate this ending
Just a sigh of resignation
Of disappointment

As you hear the sound
Of a reversing truck
Mulder beckons me
Returning my evening to normality

For this too is the way of it

Alone

On the couch
Or at the ‘puter

You

Elsewhere

Avowing your love for me

Your presence here
The exception

Not the rule

I like this, I think the end needs a bit if tweaking, I don't like the line

"Avowing your love for me".

I think if you focus on the image of her being everywhere you look

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Life is what happens while you wait for great things.

Life is what happens while you wait for great things.

I think you've missed the point. I'm telling "her" that she is never there, an absentee lover.

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