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In the second stanza, I think it reads more smoothly without the "the's", and in the iv, without the initial "her".
This piece creates a feeling of being removed from time and space, placing you somewhere both spiritual and sensual.
Nice journey.
This piece creates a feeling of being removed from time and space, placing you somewhere both spiritual and sensual.
Nice journey.
by EmilyRose on Apr. 5 2007