My Feelings are Choking my Opinions

Thank you Leanne, your suggestions are always on target! I made the changes and also went back to the last stanza and took out 'right' in the 'right now' statement. I think that makes is a bit stronger. Thank you for the lovely compliment about my purging efforts, I really appreciate and respect your opinion. 

----- LIFE: I messed up, can I have a 'do over'?