Inversion

Stephan made some insightful comments and suggestions......I might only disagree with the minor detail of "this day" vs. "today".......I like "this day"......that said, I absolutely LOVE this poem.....you tell a story AND contemplate its meaning.......it's insightful, philosophical, and poignant without being maudlin.......the journey from personal to universal and back again is well balanced and nuanced......and damn fine poetry.....Kat